Title page Chapter 2: Escape
Page 1: text: It was a slow recognition that we were not exactly dead. It all began, of course, in darkness. Gradually, painstakingly, awareness of self and identity grew, like finally awakening at the edge of health after a long sickness induced sleep. I’m not certain how long it took. At least a generation, probably more. Literally years. But finally, finally, it happened.
panel 2: takes up middle third of page. Medium to dark gray coloring, white text is in triangle arrangement, medium sized font textlooks somewhat shaky, 3 repititions: I... am.
panel 3: white bg, black text, bold, takes up most of the panel text: WE ARE!
Page 2: panel 1: goes across top of page. Shows view from portrait, a few servants cleaning/dusting other portraits, armor, perhaps dusting the viewing portrait itself. Text underneath text: After awareness came vision. We didn’t understand for the longest time. I.... I sometimes wonder just how long it took, how long we were stuck without anything but the ability to see. It terrifies me still. And it amazes me that it did not bring us totally to madness.
panel 2: a sword from a suit of armor is floating down the hall, chasing a screaming servant while a musical instrument plays at a random spot. Maybe another servant is gawking at it. Text underneath again text:If indeed we are sane, it was the magic that returned us to that state. It was probably Mel that first found she could still control metal. With that inspiration, Lauron tried her talents.... As for me.... Well, no one’s ever been able to heal death.
panel 3: side view of the portrait, with a ghostly hand emerging from it. A young Danion has his back to it, maybe just the end of his crutch and foot in the frame. Text to right side text: The benefit to that was I became bored- desperate. For so long we just watched, observed the living world passing us by.... It was not long before I thought I would sell my soul to any demon that would let me touch something, to feel again!
Page 3: thought bubble[Cara]: I don’t believe it! Gods, let this be real!
panel 2, half panel on left side: transparent Cara’s come out more , still connected to the portrait (where the painting of her remains), but looking frightened and determined to go further
panels 2 and 3 separated by sound bubble of a moderate rip
panel 3, on right side of panel 2: transparent Cara standing before painting (of whole trio), looking around in amazement speech [Cara, small text]: free...
Page 4: speech [Cara, large text]: I’M FREE!!! thought speech Lauron: Matix! thoughtspeak Mel: Th’ hell?!? Can we-?
Inset panel, triangle left center between panels 1 and 2: Lauron’s fingertips emerging from painting thoughtspeech small, somewhere within panel by Lauron: We have to try....
Inset panel, triangle to right of prior one: Mel’s forearms raised and crossed before face (classic leap through window pose) thoughtspeech Mel: Screw this! INCOMING!!!
LARGE sound bubble of a big rip
Panel 2: takes up bit more than bottom half of page. Mel (all determination) leaping, feet still stuck in painting, diving through a very shocked Cara.
Page 5: speech, at top of page, unclear of who says it: gods....
Page 6:
Panel 1: Lauron stands between other two, Mel starting to stand, Cara now on her knees. speech, Lauron: What... just happened?
Panel 2, diagonally split in half with panel 3 next to it: Mel holding up her hand, examining it and transparency effect speech: Mel: Well, we died. Right?
Panel 3: Cara looking downwards as she stands, eyes shadowed. speech, Cara: Ngh.
Panel 4, small, overlaps panel 5 underneath: Lauron, just looking confused speech, Lauron: So... what? We’re ghosts?
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